Built from patterns used by high-performing funnels (e.g., Superhuman’s “one metric” promise + social proof, Kettlebell Transformation’s VSL→apply→call structure + guarantee) and the current Dad Unit positioning. This is designed for a high-ticket offer that sells via application + call booking, while still capturing colder leads with a simple opt-in first.
HEADLINE (pick one) 1) “DROP 20–30 LBS IN 90 DAYS — WITHOUT SACRIFICING YOUR FAMILY OR CAREER.” 2) “THE 90‑DAY SELECTION PROTOCOL FOR DADS WHO REFUSE TO BE SOFT.” 3) “SPECIAL FORCES STRUCTURE FOR BUSY DADS: TRAINING + NUTRITION + BROTHERHOOD.” SUBHEAD Former Green Beret medic + celebrity trainer builds an environment where execution becomes automatic. PRIMARY CTA APPLY FOR SELECTION MICRO-PROOF (right next to CTA) • “Real dads. Real transformations.” (carousel) • “100% money-back guarantee if you follow mission compliance.”
• Train inside a small squad of dads who don’t let you disappear. • “Don’t think. Just execute.” Your plan is built for YOUR schedule + equipment. • Weekly calls. Daily check-ins. A coach who doesn’t negotiate with excuses. • Simple nutrition that works in the real world (kids, travel, work dinners). • Lose fat, build muscle, and show up at home with actual energy again. • A high-standard environment — if you want comfort, this isn’t it. • Guaranteed results if you follow mission compliance (we’ll show you the checklist).
DAY 0 (immediately): “Your score / mission is inside” + 1 CTA: apply. DAY 1: “Discipline isn’t the problem — environment is.” (reframe + story) DAY 2: Case study #1 (before/after + ‘busy dad’ context) DAY 3: “What you get” (squad, weekly calls, daily check-ins, custom plan) DAY 4: Authority (Green Beret medic + celebrity trainer + why he built this) DAY 5: Objections (time, travel, injuries, diet, equipment) + FAQ DAY 6: Guarantee + compliance checklist (shows confidence + fairness) DAY 7: Scarcity (limited squads / next cohort) + “last call to apply”